Talk:Talon/@comment-4457533-20111106015741/@comment-4457533-20111106020504

That and how you're phrasing your sentences. Like how you said "he has a power level of 100% Frieza in his base form." I would suggest putting "He has a battle power that rivals Frieza's full power." But that's just my take on it. You could leave it if you want.

EDIT: Also, the first sentence on a page usually starts with the title instead of "this is".